• Pact of Blood and Ice

    From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to All on Tue Nov 15 16:38:08 2022
    Hello!

    I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going to incorporate
    it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a standalone
    piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.

    I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and just wrote
    it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial than my
    other works (which is saying something).

    PROOFREADERS WANTED!

    If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be upheld beyond the
    black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst technological terror
    ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from the stuff
    nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once the pact of
    blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.


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  • From John Dovey@4:920/1.1 to Richard Falken on Tue Nov 15 20:07:42 2022

    Hello!


    I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going
    to incorporate

    it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a
    standalone

    piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.


    I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and
    just wrote

    it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial
    than my

    other works (which is saying something).


    PROOFREADERS WANTED!


    If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be
    upheld beyond the

    black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst
    technological terror

    ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from
    the stuff

    nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once
    the pact of

    blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.

    Me Me Me ... Pick me!!! <grin>


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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to John Dovey on Wed Nov 16 09:01:46 2022
    Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
    By: John Dovey to Richard Falken on Tue Nov 15 2022 08:07 pm

    Me Me Me ... Pick me!!! <grin>

    Lol, you ar not giving me much of an option, do you?

    I just found some mistakes worth fixing in the current draft, so I will give you a
    link to a corrected version of the draft latter today.

    Cheers!

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  • From August Abolins@2:460/256 to Richard Falken on Wed Nov 16 18:18:01 2022
    Hi Richard...

    Hello!
    I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going to incorporate
    it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a standalone
    piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.
    I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and just wrote
    it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial than my
    other works (which is saying something).
    PROOFREADERS WANTED!
    If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be upheld beyond the
    black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst technological terror
    ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from the stuff
    nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once the pact of
    blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.
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    I sent you a netmail. Did you get it? There is always Protonmail too. ;)

    Ciao!
    /|ug (https://t.me/aabolins)

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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to August Abolins on Wed Nov 16 11:37:13 2022
    Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
    By: August Abolins to Richard Falken on Wed Nov 16 2022 06:18 pm

    I sent you a netmail. Did you get it? There is always Protonmail too. ;)

    Don't worry, your link is on its way.

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  • From august abolins@2:221/1.59 to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 11:44:09 2022

    Don't worry, your link is on its way.

    Read and some grammatical corrections suggested. Sent to your Protonmail.

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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to august abolins on Thu Nov 17 11:05:36 2022
    Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
    By: august abolins to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 2022 11:44 am


    Don't worry, your link is on its way.

    Read and some grammatical corrections suggested. Sent to your Protonmail.

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    I got them and answered your mail too.

    I will not discuss further because I prefer the others here to have no prejudices while reading their copies XD

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  • From august abolins@2:221/1.59 to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 12:25:47 2022

    I got them and answered your mail too.

    Got it. I was a bit tired when I started, and stopped at the 50% point. But then I wanted to see how the events concluded. However, it's a bit of a task to stop and make corrections/suggestions.

    I will not discuss further because I prefer the others here to have no prejudices while reading their copies XD

    Absolutely. I knew that. That is why I maintained our pvt channel.

    I will try to answer your questions asap while they are still quite fresh in my mind.

    How many more pairs of eyes do you have on your story?


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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to august abolins on Thu Nov 17 13:00:51 2022
    Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
    By: august abolins to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 2022 12:25 pm

    How many more pairs of eyes do you have on your story?

    Four more pairs that I know of. Not bad, because it is usually very hard to get people interested XD


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